tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7248059698236018186.post6276104373772804008..comments2023-04-03T04:34:00.446-07:00Comments on Lynn Crain's XtraOrdinary Romance: WeWriWa ~ My Unpublished 8 ~ #8Sunday #LynnCrainLynn Crainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17563978872099232823noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7248059698236018186.post-10318999386293270552013-10-06T15:21:16.491-07:002013-10-06T15:21:16.491-07:00Well, there's a little more head-hopping here ...Well, there's a little more head-hopping here than I'd like. I was really jarred by the last sentence. But the premise is really intriguing and the dialogue (monologue?) is extremely good. Keep it up!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551959202889083501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7248059698236018186.post-2363002593940327242013-10-06T12:25:16.757-07:002013-10-06T12:25:16.757-07:00Such an intriguing story. I just really want to re...Such an intriguing story. I just really want to read the entire thing. Her laugh at that exact point in time is a bit chilling inagoodway - excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7248059698236018186.post-87941018059873068122013-10-06T12:02:14.177-07:002013-10-06T12:02:14.177-07:00I like the tidbits you keep giving us. so much hap...I like the tidbits you keep giving us. so much happened to her and now they plan to use her for worse thingsAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13164269285285491186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7248059698236018186.post-87866845324069997022013-10-06T08:56:13.049-07:002013-10-06T08:56:13.049-07:00I'm interested in her feeling about all of thi...I'm interested in her feeling about all of this: she's got a lot to deal with and if it was me, I don't think I could be as level-headed as her :-)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7248059698236018186.post-39409761202316765872013-10-06T06:29:32.756-07:002013-10-06T06:29:32.756-07:00I think you have a great story going here.I think you have a great story going here.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7248059698236018186.post-23088385297411380402013-10-06T06:21:51.158-07:002013-10-06T06:21:51.158-07:00Sounds like a nice guy. He sacrificed her, time fo...Sounds like a nice guy. He sacrificed her, time for pay back!Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7248059698236018186.post-2876955711083889382013-10-06T05:22:05.497-07:002013-10-06T05:22:05.497-07:00Love the line, 'sacrificed to the IED gods'...Love the line, 'sacrificed to the IED gods'. Great use of the 8's.J. A. Hornbucklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17052929905955160076noreply@blogger.com