Hi
everyone!
This
week is my eighth time with the Weekend Writing Warriors. Here’s 8 sentences
from one of my current WIPs, The Voyage of the Inara Marue.
Sighing deeply, she slowly turned
to look at him more fully. "The nanites they gave me are different from
anything I've had before. I can't really explain it. It's like I'm looking at
my body and its function down a long tunnel. It's as if I'm an observer…like a
war is happening in my body…and I have no control over anything."
Startled, he didn't like what he
was hearing. "Do you know who's winning?"
"I am,” she answered with another
lopsided grin.
This is a sci-fi novel with some romance, not a
lot. It’s more about the story. The heroine, Camden Jayde is a soldier who was
modified without her permission. The faction paying the bill modified her for
the good of mankind but the military has other ideas. Those ideas serve no one
but their own purposed. Her mission: save mankind, save the species. All she
has to do is to accept.
Hope you
enjoyed my Sunday 8. Please go check out the other WeWriWa authors this week,
just click on the logo or paste this link into your browser and visit all the
wonderful authors writing this weekend.
Thanks and see you next
time!
Lynn
I really like your idea!
ReplyDeleteI love the do you know who's winning line and her sassy response.
ReplyDeleteA very nice 8. I like when says I'm winning.
ReplyDeleteGood for her, glad she feels she's winning! Enjoying this story, another terrific excerpt!
ReplyDeleteNicely done...love the story idea.
ReplyDeleteInteresting little scene...and I love her spunk.
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